The core of your writing while sounding reasonable in the beginning, did not work well with me after some time. Someplace within the paragraphs you actually managed to make me a believer but only for a short while. I nevertheless have got a problem with your leaps in logic and you might do well to help fill in all those gaps. If you actually can accomplish that, I would surely be impressed. Huey Sreaves
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